Hello Reader Ref: '50 States Of Whyte' - teen&family/fiction/action-comedy/film/56Kwords/2012-17 This story can be best described as is one huge laugh ! In the story a girl called ‘Mari’ gets pregnant even though she still a virgin ! So her overprotective dad, ‘HandzOff’, cant figure out just how she got pregnant watching her 24/7 ! He goes completely bonkers. He ‘shrinks’ in both weight and height ! Meanwhile mum, ‘Kirbi’ , is having the time of her life with a ‘virgin’ in the house who just happens to be called ‘Mari’ or better still a ‘Virgin-Mari’ ! However once HandzOff discovers what his wife is up to he does an almighty U-turn where he ‘swells’ into something dead sexy ! Thats followed by a more ‘twists-and-turns’ with a surprising ending. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------oOo---------------------------------------------------------------------- So I just happen to mention my story to my doctor. They go “What a great story ! What a brilliant idea !” Then they continue with “What about her dad ?” I reply “Hes gone bonkers. Hes lost weight and height too !” She was quite impressed with my story and it put a smile on her face. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------oOo-------------------------------------------------------------------- Also try my other titles :- ‘Crocology’ - teen&family/black-comedy/fiction/film//6Kwords/2016 ‘HandShakers’ - teen/humorous-short-stories/fiction/films/31Kwords/2012-17 ‘SubSouls’ - teen/metaphor/5Kwords/2012-17 Happy Reading ! Bye ‘MrK.Singh’ disabled-writer&campaigner